burning summer day
it must be a savior wind
that brought the coolness
~~~
was it the cool breeze
that made your skin tingle, girl
or was it my gaze?
~~~
Jun
23
2013
Just Joyfulness
Celebrating joy
burning summer day
it must be a savior wind
that brought the coolness
~~~
was it the cool breeze
that made your skin tingle, girl
or was it my gaze?
~~~
Wonderful … I like the romantic touch in that second haiku. Thank you for participating.
Thank you for setting up the challenge and dropping in 🙂
Oh, it was the gaze—no doubt about it! 🙂
Cooling Winds
Hahaha! Thank you 😀
I like the first one best. Then again, I’m female. Savior wind is wonderful phrase.
Thanks so much Maggie 🙂
Your first one made my skin tingle!!!
Hahaha! Glad it did that 🙂
That second one is perfect… love it