you had stood there
looking away, face closed
an ocean between us
~~~
our watery birthplace
that hums through our veins
and springs from our eyes
~~~
imagination’s
infinite tides wash up
little haiku pebbles
~~~
ocean breeze stirs up
brittle nests of memories
sand in my eyes
~~~
The first haiku is very powerful. loved reading all of them.
Thanks so much Kalpana 🙂
I related most to the last ‘ku, but all are well written.
Thanks so much 🙂
fantastic writing…
i can feel the first and the last one deeply..
Thanks Sunil 🙂
Nicely written and they aptly describe aspects of the ocean. Love the last one. It gives a tinge of hope! Great take Joy!
Hank
Thank you Hank.
For me, the second and fourth are awesome. Our watery birthplace…perfect.