…
A single call it was –
four fluid notes falling
lucid and luminous
into the silence of the valley.
Maybe the bird was declaring
the departure of daylight now
crowning the edges of leaves
in brilliant swansong.
Or maybe it was light itself
tinkling out a farewell,
a limpid promise of returning
on the wings of dawn.
The silence was somehow sweeter
as though the call after falling
had burst into a million pieces
of joy. And spread across the valley.
Into which sparrows had chirped
and other birds chattered and
the winds that chased each other
had seemed somewhat raucous.
Alas! The bird had flown,
to fill some other valley
with its luminous song.
Or just that light had died.
But even though the night
had crept up sombre with
its shroud of darkness and
promise of shady secrets,
I sat wrapt in rapture, lit
with joy, changed forever by
the touch of a beauty so
ephemeral, yet eternal.
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For dVerse Poets Pub Microworld Poetry
I had a friend who could bird by ear. We would walk through the woods and he would identify the bird by it’s call. Those were good days.
Unfortunately, I can’t. I just listen and am happy 🙂
me either – but I love to listen
What a beautiful blue image that is. I love the joyful birdsong in this poem, and it resonates as I live in a valley full of birdsong, am listening to some right now……
Thanks Sherry. If you can listen to birdsong you are rich beyond measure 🙂
What a beautiful moment, to hear it and be enraptured with its luminous song ~
I specially admire this part:
The silence was somehow sweeter
as though the call after falling
had burst into a million pieces
of joy. And spread across the valley.
Thanks for joining in ~
Thanks Grace. It was indeed a precious moment.
A wonderful serenade with those birds playing.. It is truly a moment to remember.
Thanks Bjorn 🙂
The song of dinosaur.. still exists in bird.. time memorial..
time of old.. time of valley tropical.. time of lore..
time is now.. bird is now.. song is now..
beauty..:)
Hmmmm …. That is an interesting connection. I guess, we are one, each in the other exists … Thanks 🙂
I’ve wandered around Blogland this morning, and ended up here – away with the birds, perhaps? I hope, now I’ve altered my settings, that you won’t have more problems with comments on any of my blogs in future. ♥
Yes, Blogspot makes it a bit hard for WordPressers to comment. I wonder if it’s so the other way around too?
Just beautiful, Jolly. 🙂
Thanks Celestine 🙂
What an exquisite poem. I love birds, they are so fragile but they really do touch the heart.
Thanks so much.
Songs of birds are so melodious … your poem is beautiful 🙂
Thanks Amrit.