(100-word flash fiction)
“Another mocktail?”
“Sure!” she says, laughing. He sidles closer.
GREEN, he thinks.
“I’ve told you my entire life story but all I know is your name.”
“My life’s so boring. Nothing ever happens.”
“To a drop-dead gorgeous girl like you?”
“Truth!” She says, inching closer and dropping her voice. “My father won’t let me do anything. He’s all powerful and all.”
AMBER. AMBER.
“He can’t be the President!” He does manage a nervous laugh.
“He’s a gang leader, a Godfather or something.” She speaks directly into his ear. “I have 6 disguised bodyguards scattered around, watching us.”
RED. RED. RED.
Thanks to the wonderful Rochelle, here we meet again 🙂 I am happy I wrangled another story out of the muse. I must admit it’s hard sometimes because it’s bedtime here and the brain does not always co-operate when all it wants is to do is zone out. 🙂 This this story does not make sense to you, now you know 🙂
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PHOTO PROMPT © Na’ama Yehudah
I like where you took the prompt, definite alarm signals, time to get out of there!
Thanks Iain. Whether he leaves or stays could be another story 🙂
Cleaver. She’s playing him. Fun read.
You thought she was playing him? Interesting! Thanks for the compliment 🙂
Dear Joy,
RED indeed. Unique use of the prompt, you clever woman.
Shalom,
Rochelle
Thanks Rochelle 🙂
Great use of the traffic lights
Thanks Neil 🙂
Very good. I like how you used the colours of the traffic lights through the story.
(That’s not a typo by the way: ‘colour’ is the correct English spelling. 🙂 )
Susan A Eames at
Travel, Fiction and Photos
Thanks Susan. I too spell colour like that 🙂
Loved the structure of this. Really good.
Thanks Sandra 🙂
I’d watch out for a green arrow and exit left!
Here’s mine!
Yes, before those bouncers get to him 🙂
lol, RED indeed…
🙂
‘Nothing ever happens’!
And now we know why.
I’m in total agreement with everyone else, very clever use of the prompt.
Thanks very much 🙂
Those flags went off BIG time! Fun stuff, Joy!
Thanks a lot William 🙂
Perfect title for the dual meaning in your story. Very creative use of the prompt and very clear writing.
Thanks very much 🙂
You’re very welcome.
Time to do some ‘social distancing’ … 😉
Very much so 🙂
Very clever use of the prompt!
Thanks very much 🙂
Nice take on the prompt! I wonder if she is lying or telling the truth. In any case, if I were him, I’d leave.
Truth, I think. Either way EXIT is best for him 🙂
Very clever take!
Thanks very much Liz 🙂
Wonderful take on the prompt, Joy.
He best turn tail and run!
Thanks Dale. Yes EXIT is the best signal for him 😀
Ha, loved your take on this! I hope he acts on those signals or he could find himself propping up an overpass pretty soon 🙂
Oh dear! We don’t want that. Let’s hope he bolted 🙂
i imagine a shotgun wedding in the works. 🙂
Hahaha 🙂 Nice pun 😀
Oh, that was terrific! Totally unexpected, funny story 🙂
Thanks very much 🙂
Great stuff using the lights in the image. I think this guy is right to hit red and screech to a halt… clever piece
Thanks very much Laurie 🙂
Ah! Now that is one clever told tale.
Intersting imageries. I enjoyed the ride too. Well done!
Thanks a lot Natasha 🙂
Outstanding use of the prompt! Great story. I bet he threw it in reverse and shot out of there as fast as he could. 🙂
Hahaha 😀 I like the idea of reversing and bolting asap. Thanks Russell. 🙂
Great stuff, that’s one way to deter the unwanted suitor.
Yes, isn’t it? 🙂
LOL … Either she’s trying to chase him away or is warning him to behave.
I thoroughly enjoyed this story, Joy. Your take on the prompt was very unique.
BRAVO … Best Story this week.
Be safe … Be Healthy … Be Happy 😍
Isadora 😎
Awww. thanks for the bestest compliment 🙂 You too be safe and happy 🙂
Okay. I am smiling about this. Good story, well-told.
Thanks Bill 🙂
Skilfully told – I really like the switch in the middle from predatory man to scared man, tables turned !
Hahaha 🙂 Yes, wish we could do it ALL the time 🙂
This was a clever use of the prompt which I enjoyed read
Thanks Mike 🙂
It’s funny because you can actually see those lights going off in guys’ heads sometimes! I think she was playing with him trying to scare him off.
Really? I haven’t been on the dating scene, so that is an interesting piece of information 🙂
I love this. Great use of metaphor for a fun, playful story.
Thanks very much 🙂