(100-word flash fiction)
She knew he would come. She had not expected flowers though. And chocolates.
She almost lost her resolve.
The charm was in place, the smoothness had not lost any of its silkiness. The dimples almost lifted her off the bed into his arms. Thank goodness her leg was broken.
“Sorry!” he said. “Faking it again,” she thought.
“Here, have some coffee!” she offered the Styrofoam cup from the hospital tray.
He took it as though it was the forgiveness she never gave.
“It helps,” she thought, “to have a nurse best friend. They know how to spike coffee with cyanide.”
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After some very hectic work weeks, I am back. Good to start writing and reading all your stories again 😊 Good to visit your page again, Rochelle ♥
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Nurses know that? I’m steering well clear of hospitals from now on
Nurses know a lot more than they let on. But then Google also knows a lot 😀
Oh wow! She doesn’t take any prisoners, does she?
Not after enduring a lot of violence. Last straw!
Dear Joy,
Welcome back. Why do I get the feeling he had something to do with her broken leg? Guess he’s about to get his reward. I love the description of his dimples could lift her off the bed. Nicely done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
Thanks Rochelle. Some men have it coming, I guess 🙂
Oh my goodness! I wasn’t expecting that.
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I don’t think he was either 😉 Thanks for commenting Susan.
So much for revenge is best served cold… 😀
Yes, with a coffee flavour too 🙂
Deadly drink by faking the leg injury.
Planned revenge is successful, but what next? Police should have handled this…
My story also has the protagonist faking it 🙂
It’s hard to fake a leg injury while in hospital. They have X-ray machines. Going to read your story soon 🙂
Oy! I hope I never meet THAT nurse!
Hahahaha 🙂 Maybe if you want to bump someone off, you might need her expertise 🙂 Nah, just joking 😀
It would have taken more than flowers and chocolate to change her mind!
No, not after years of violence. Some people never learn 🙂
I hope he deserved it., and that an Agatha Christie-type detective doesn’t start sniffing around!
I think the nurse was off duty and she has a broken leg 😉
Good to see you back, JJ, and with a bang!
Still, at least he’s handy for A&E…
Good to read your comment. What’s A&E?
Accident and Emergency, in the US think ER
Oh Ok
Coffee and cyanide. Just as effective as arsenic and old lace. I think that coffee is “forgiveness” well earned.
It’s nice to have you back. I’ve wondered where you’ve been.
I should have chosen a slow-acting poison, But coffee and cyanide sounded good 🙂 Good to be back and thanks for the lovely comment 🙂
Though that nurse … me thinks … won’t be a nurse for very long … 😉
Yikes, though!
I think she was off-duty that day. These things can be planned well, you know 😉
Ah, yeah, planning … 😉
a nurse from hell for sure. may her tribe decrease.
As long as men continue to hurt women and children, I think such nurses are quite handy.
She played that circumstance like it was a fine violin. I’m sure he earned what she gave him.
I am sure he was a bad apple, charm notwithstanding!
p.s. Welcome back, Jolly!
Thanks very much, Lisa ♥
You’re welcome.
Wow, that turned dark very quickly 🙂
Thanks for dropping in and commenting.
Oh dear, we won’t be hearing from him again. What on earth has he done to her?
The usual. Domestic violence.
You set up your twist nicely. I loved your description of his dimples!
Thanks Penny. Some men have charm in oodles and nothing much else 🙂
What a twist. This time his charm couldn’t cut it and he met his demise.
Yes. Looks like it 🙂
That’s a great twist to your story. Very enjoyable.
Thanks a lot. Glad you enjoyed 🙂
Oh my… talk about friends in high places!
Very handy 😉
My goodness. At least she might have the nurses company in prison if they get caught. Revenge a terrible affliction. I was not expecting such a drastic ending. Well done.
Thank you!!! I am hoping they don’t get caught 😀
I guess she holds a grudge … : ) I’m sure he deserved what he got.
It seems like there’s a little domestic violence in there somewhere.
Nicely written … Be Safe
Isadora 😎
You did a great job conveying the tension of her internal struggle, wavering whether to forgive him. Then we find out she’d set it all up ahead of time. Great story.
-David