(100-word flash fiction)
It was a ship with special powers. When the weather was just right, the white sails would turn into birds’ wings, begin to flap and gently lift the ship free from leaden water into the clouds.
There was one condition, though. The women had to sing. So they swayed, their grass skirts twirling in graceful arcs, their voices rising and falling like air currents, holding the ship aloft.
One day, while they were in the air, a young lad (with sharp eyes) glimpsed green through a gap and cried “Land!”
The singing stopped.
The ship descended and Aotearoa was discovered.
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This is a work of fiction inspired by the various legends and stories of how the Maori arrived in Aotearoa (Maori name for New Zealand which means The Land of the Long White Cloud). The actual stories are far more interesting, intriguing, inspirational and magical.
When I saw the prompt photo, I immediately thought of sails and well, it’s a new year and being the hopeless romantic that I am, there HAD to be singing and dancing and MAGIC 🙂
A VERY JOYOUS NEW YEAR TO ALL MY FRIDAY FICTIONEER FRIENDS 🙂 And a big hug to Rochelle for keeping the tradition alive 🙂
What a wonderful mythological tale. This would make a great novel.
Thanks James. Yes, it might, great idea. Happy New Year! 🙂
Beautiful tale, I want it to be true 🙂
Thanks Iain. The true Maori tales are pretty cool. And beautiful! Happy New Year! 🙂
This is a wonderful mythology… it would be perfect way to find a magic land.
Thanks Bjorn. Yes, it would 🙂 Happy New Year!
Loved the image you created
Thanks Michael. Happy New Year!
Hopefully, it did not land with too much of a thump! That was a pretty story
Thanks Dale. It was a compassionate ship that knew not to gives jolts to its charges 🙂 Happy New Year!
Thanks! To you as well!
What a lovely fable. I am a sucker for mythological tales, especially the made-up ones!
Thanks Anurag. Yes, mythological tales are the best. Look at the Mahabharat 🙂
This was quite magical!
Thanks Sandra 🙂
Dear Joyful,
What a lovely story. I could almost hear the women sing. I’m fascinated with the Maori. They are a unique people. Well done. Happy New Year!
Shalom,
Rochelle
Thanks Rochelle. 🙂
This is beautiful – such lovely imagery and language. Gorgeous
Thanks Lynn.
Very cool, I like that ship 🙂 A magical tale!
Thanks so much 🙂
I loved that gentle, hopeful story. A lovely way to travel – song power – and a wonderful place to discover!
Thanks Penny. Yes, NZ is very lovely indeed!
How utterly lovely!
Thanks Louise 🙂
Lovely new fairy tale, though I wonder why it had to be the women doing the singing? Give the men some of the work 🙂
Thanks Liz. The men? Have you seen the Maori haka? We don’t want the men to stomp and dance in a flying ship 😀
What an amazing journey. What amazing singing. I would love to be a travelling on that ship.
Thanks Kelvin. Me too 🙂 The magic is that we can in our imagination 🙂
What a wonderful tale based on legends. I love the magical fantasy element and the intrusion of a boy and land. So glad they stopped singing – I love New Zealand.
Thanks Irene. Legends are quite magical indeed 🙂
your tale based on the legend is just so perfect. Beautifully written.
Thanks so much, Moon 🙂
Always glad to read of singing and magic and…beautiful women.
Mine: https://kindredspirit23.wordpress.com/2018/01/05/disappearing-act/
Scott
Thanks Scott 🙂
I was happy to read “The ship descended” and not “The ship fell from the sky.” That would have been (3) to many words anyway. ::smile::
Yea, it would have been too many and would probably have killed them as well 🙂
I love how these legends prove that the tribal people were so imaginative and intelligent whereas modern society might view them as backwards or lacking.
Thanks Fatima. All the old tribal legends are far more interesting and thought-provoking than the modern legends like the lives of the Kardashians 🙂
By far 😂😂
I love that story, Joyful. I wish all of us could have the appreciation of nature that the native peoples do. Good writing. 🙂 — Suzanne
Thanks Patricia 🙂
Love the dreamy quality of this story.
Thanks Gran 🙂
This should be expanded into something much longer – really magical.
Yes, true! If only the bread-and-butter life would let me 😦 Thanks Rachel.
Beautiful writing!
Thanks Sascha.
Enchanting story!
Thanks Dawn.